Imperfect Spiral

May 15, 2013
The accidental death of a young child touches the lives of others in ways they never expected. When 5-year-old Humphrey dies while in the charge of his 15-year-old baby sitter, Danielle, she wants nothing more than to quietly mourn the loss. However, when the police discover that the driver of the car that struck Humphrey is an illegal alien, Danielle quickly realizes that there are those who would use the tragedy to forward their own agendas. City politics and an immigration debate soon dwarf Humphrey's death. Only Justin, a new friend, seems to understand her desire to honor the little boy's memory. But Justin bears a secret that threatens to change everything. Chapters highlighting Danielle's memories of her precocious charge are interspersed with those cataloging the events following his death. Levy's unflinching look at pain is masterful. The narrative fluidly moves from lighter moments with Humphrey to the darkness of grief, avoiding false sentimentality. Genuine characters, complicated relationships and realistic dialogue will ease readers through the difficult journey. Unfortunately, Danielle and Humphrey's story is overtaken by social commentary. The debate over immigration policies steals the stage, leaching the tale of its emotional impact. This poignant novel loses its way. (Fiction. 12 & up)

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September 1, 2013

Gr 9 Up-Unwilling to work as a CIT for the summer before 10th grade, Danielle instead takes a babysitting job. Five-year-old Humphrey is a fantastic kid, and with him she can let go of the fears of being a leader that kept her from camp. The unlikely pair form a strong and genuine, if unconventional, friendship-something very different from the proximity-based friendships Danielle has with her peers. Everything comes to a sudden halt when Humphrey chases a football into the path of an oncoming car. His death weighs heavily on Danielle, who feels guilty for the accident and alone in her grief: How can she explain to anyone what the child meant to her? Meanwhile, the town is using the accident to push for safety improvements along the road and legislation against undocumented immigrants like the family in the car that struck the boy. Siblings, parents, and friends are all portrayed as real people struggling with their own issues, and Danielle finally begins to understand her complex relationships with the people around her. Contrasting her pain with the town's political agendas emphasizes that the rest of the world doesn't stop because her world did. The discussion of these real issues is deftly woven into the story, never overshadowing the protagonist's journey toward healing. A budding romance rounds out the plot. This book is sure to be a hit among teens seeking a substantive drama.-Brandy Danner, Perkins School for the Blind, Watertown, MA

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July 1, 2013
Grades 8-11 Danielle wasn't sure she would make a great babysitter, but five-year-old Humphrey was such a cool little kid. Then, after a successful session at the playground, where Danielle teaches Humphrey to throw a football in a perfect spiral, the ball bounces into the street, and Humphrey takes off after it. She remembers seeing a teal-blue minivan and vaguely wondering if that was the car that hit Humphrey, but all details are lost in a haze of grief when Danielle learns Humphrey has been killed. Her feeling of guilt chokes back her words. The community, however, seizes on the accident to promote two political causes: making the road safer and cracking down on illegal immigrants (the driver of the blue minivan turns out to be undocumented). The theme of immigration issues reaches into the plotline from several angles, perhaps stretching credulity. But it does inform readers about the plight of illegal immigrants and, more importantly, their children.(Reprinted with permission of Booklist, copyright 2013, American Library Association.)

January 1, 2014
Babysitter Danielle's five-year-old charge, Humphrey, is killed in a hit-and-run accident on her watch. The driver is an undocumented immigrant, and Danielle gets dragged into a fierce debate about illegal immigration. This story of love and loss is deepened by the protagonist's inspiring development from someone afraid of conflict into someone who stands up for what she believes is right.

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September 1, 2013
Danielle's summer job babysitting five-year-old Humphrey is more fun than it is work. Both lonely in their own families, babysitter and "babysittee" (as Humphrey calls himself) quickly develop a closeness more akin to that between siblings. When Humphrey is killed in a hit-and-run accident -- on Danielle's watch -- and the driver is found to be an undocumented immigrant without a valid license, Danielle gets dragged into the center of fierce debates about public safety measures and illegal immigration. Danielle is disconcerted by the tumult and by the surprising intensity of her grief and guilt. And although her Washington, DC, suburb is buzzing about "The Tragedy," no one seems to want to talk about Humphrey himself. Supportive new friend Justin helps Danielle cope, but it seems even he has an agenda. Danielle's first-person, present-tense narration alternates with flashbacks of her days with Humphrey, emphasizing both the messiness of the accident's aftermath and the vividness of her happy memories. This story of love and loss is deepened by the protagonist's inspiring development from someone afraid of conflict on any scale into someone who -- acting as an advocate for the little boy who was killed -- can stand up for what she believes is right despite pressure from an entire community. katie bircher

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